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In my opinion, advertisements of  are beneficial for encouraging more people to volunteer in their communities. Nowdays, various methods of advertisement like television, social network sevice, small talk are able to make all of ages to think about volunteer. The SNS is very strong function for teenagers with short contents and easy sharing. Also, talk concert is easy to access about needs of vo..

In my opinion, the automation tools are able to offer more efficiencies about repetitive workflows compared to results by humans in many industires. The machine of automation do not need to rest for continual work while labors require some time for refresh. The diffrence of working hours could get more results, enable to get higher producing output. Although automated machines work for all day, ..

For good leader, the ability of decision is essential to create best result and establish positive relationship with team members. By integrating diverse opinions into a unified solution in complex situations as a leader, the smooth workflow can be maintained. For example, best result is able to be generated  with the persuable conclusion of leader in team meeting.     1번은 다양한 이유가 있는 경우2번은 둘중에 하..

※ 금지단어: We, our, us,I, They, you their, them, it, that, there is, there are, because는 1번만 쓸 것, hard, happy, in terms of, want,  Rental Service 1. 스쿠터와 자전거는 공간 효율적이고 혼잡한 거리를 쉽게 이동할 수 있어 도시 여행에 이상적이기 때문에 도시 교통의 필수적인 부분이 되었습니다.M : The rental scooter and bike have become an essential component of urban transportation since these vehicles are space efficient and move easily on complex street which is..

- allow 목 to부정사 가 처음 시작인 것이 좋음- who is working 같은 관계대명사 안 쓰는 게 좋음 ex) Students who are working in the company- and로 연결 시키지 않기 => ex) Students who are working in the company gain  a lot of Knowlege and they can get good opportunity to interact with theur peers.- So, But, And 첫문장에 쓰지 않기- hard -> difficult 써야 함 / 열심히 공부한다에서 study hard가 아니라 much study- met 쓰면 안됨 -> hang out || I am with ~~ 같은 걸로 바꿔야 함

In the given set of materials, the reading passage and the lecture deal with Hohokam civilization disintegrationThe author of the reading assumes that there are several satisfactory explanations of rapid disintegration by anthropologists, whereas the lecture aruges against it by providing three compelling rebuttals. Paragraph Two (Body1)1. First of all, the professor points out that the the seve..

P142 ~ P143 Paragraph One (Introduction)In the given set of materials, the reading passage and the lecture deal with the emerald ash borerThe author of the reading assumes that there are several ways to solve the problem which ash trees are destroyed by emerald ash borer, whereas the lecture aruges against it by providing three compelling rebuttals. Paragraph Two (Body1)1. First of all, the prof..

- Integrated Essay Template -  Paragraph One (Introduction)In the given set of materials, the reading passage and the lecture deal with ____________The author of the reading belives / assumes that ___________________, whereas the lecture aruges against it by providing three compelling rebuttals. Paragraph Two (Body1)1. First of all, the lecture / professor points out that __________________.2. I..

P113 지문에 대한 반박 내용 First 문단-  The global warming will reduce the size and flow of rivers by increasing evaporation and changing precipitation.-  That phenomenon will result in negatively affect to the productivity and generation of hydroelectric facilities. Next 문단-  The hydropower facilities reduces a lot of water by building up silt at the bottom of the reservoir.-  The routine maintenance is n..