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TOEFL - Writing 1주차

PaPs 2024. 11. 14. 15:38

 

 


※ Writing 금지 단어 : We, our, us, I, They, you their, them, it, that, there is, there are, because는 1번 만 쓸 것, hard, happy, in terms of, want

 

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Writing Note Writing
  • 주제 : Hydropower: ↑ used b/c adv
  • 근거1 - Unlimited source of energy
    • produce continu
    • generate anywhere
  • 근거2 - little mainten
    • durable materials → X dmage
    •   components  ↓ repairs
  • 근거3 - ↓ risk of flooding
    • rivers overflow ← rainfall/snowmelt
    • contain floodwaters & regulate river
  • 주제   : Nowdays, the hydropower will be used in the future with many advantages.
  • 근거1 : Hydropower is an unlimited source of energy, which can be used anywhere.
  • 근거2 : Little maintenance of a hydroelectric is needed to reduce for repairs by preventing structural damage.
  • 근거3 : Hydroelectirc dams can reduce damage of flooding such as rivers overflow, destructive flood.  

 

 

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Writing Note Writing
  • 주제 : Mandatory music class Problems
  • 근거1 - Most student not career
    • unrelated field
    • not benefit in life
  • 근거2 - grading is unfair
    • innate ability → low marks
    • grade is critical  enter top university X
  • 주제 : Some disadvanges of mandatory music classes is aruged by some critics.
  • 근거1 : Most students, will work in unrelated music, don'
    t need to learn skills in music classes. 
  • 근거2 :   Students who don't have innate musical ability can't get good grade of music, which is critical for entering top university.

 

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Writing Note Writing
  • 주제 : How Mima mounds formed
  • 근거1 - built up by sediment
    • severe droughts
    • small dust particles
  • 근거2 - formed by melting glaciers
    • carried soil & debris → depressions
    • Snow melt → Mima mounds 
  • 주제 : How Mima mounds were created is able to be accessed by scienttists with recent research. 
  • 근거1 : Mima mounds were created by the process, which is carrying sediment with wind in dry conditions. 
  • 근거2 : Melting glaciers made Mima mounds by carrying soil and other debris, which is settled in depressions in the snow. 

 

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Writing Note Writing
  • 주제 : T.rex scavenger
  • 근거1 - teeth
    • not enough nutrition → eat fatty tissue
    • had dull → using these teeth
  • 근거2 - brain structure
    • responsible process odor large → sense of smell 
  • 근거3 - small eyes
    • poor eyesight → depressions
  • 주제 : T. rex was not a predator but a scavenger by some evidences.
  • 근거1 : T. rex's teeth is dull wide, which is suitable to crushing bones to eat fatty tissue. 
  • 근거2 : T.rex have a very strong sense of smell by their brain structure, which is consisted with very large part of responsible processing odors.
  • 근거3 : Large eyes is also needed to locate and track prey over long distances in the case of predator, but T. rex had small eyes.  

 

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Writing Note Writing
  • 주제 : Automated telephone system: advs
  • 근거1 - target # ppl. reached quickly 
    • reached quickly 
    • no schdule braek
  • 근거2 - receiving accurate answer ↑  
    • not hide real opinions with machine
  • 근거3 - probability of errors ↓  
    • human misstating question / mispronouncing names
  • 주제 : Using of automated telephone systems has some beneficials of collecting survey data.
  • 근거1 : This method of surveying process can reach quickly at target number by rapid succession and no schedule break. 
  • 근거2 : The responent tends to tell their real opinions about the machine's questions without appearing unkind. 
  • 근거3 : The automated systems can get more reliable data without human operator's mistake such as misstating questions or mispronouncing names.