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In my opinion, advertisements of  are beneficial for encouraging more people to volunteer in their communities. Nowdays, various methods of advertisement like television, social network sevice, small talk are able to make all of ages to think about volunteer. The SNS is very strong function for teenagers with short contents and easy sharing. Also, talk concert is easy to access about needs of volunteer and how to volunteer for older people. If many people are getting information about volunteers continually through these methods, some of them are able to recognize about need of  and try some work in volunteer. Therefore, advertisements of volunteer are able to provide a lot of benefits for their communities. 

 

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As far as I can remember, people are been debating the pros and cons of the topic.

 

 

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(Introduction)

1. As far as I can remember, people have been debating the pros and cons of the topic. From my point of veiw, I firmly feel that thesis statement.

 

(An ongoing debate exists over the main topic. Regarding this controversial issue, I understand why (the opponent students) thinks that the other opinion is crucial impact, whereas I strongly support the idea that these statement.)

 

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First of all, topic sentence 1.

Supporting details 1 (general statement)

Supporting details 2 (with statistics, studies, or personal examples)

Concluding remark (better but optional)

 

(Conclusion)

1. To sum up, everyone may hold a different view on this issue. However, I absolutely support the prospective that restate the thesis statement. 

 

 

As far as I can remember, people have been debating the topic that students learn more effectively with the help of smart devices or, do the devices interfere with learning. From my point of veiw, I firmly feel that thesis statement. These smart devices are beneficial for studying. Through functions of smart devices, students are able to study without paper notes and various color pens. The reason is that smart devices provides unlimited paper and all of types of pen to people who use these functions. Also, student are able to use educational video or internet sevice for searching about knowledges by using smart devices. To sum up, some of people may hold a different view on this issue. However, I absolutely support the prospective that restate the thesis statement.